Someone wrote in [personal profile] alanajoli 2007-05-01 07:44 pm (UTC)

This is actually a huge issue in first drafts of almost every author, and it doesn't stop with "nod her head." Here are some others:

"raised up"
"shouted out"
"fell down"
"drew out" (as in a sword)

I could go on and on, but I have a novel to edit . . . ;-)

Shawn

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