They felt it was lacking in narrative tension. I'm actually not entirely sure what that means in context, but once I figure it out, I'll better understand why they didn't accept it. ;) (Also, I'll read this quarter's magazine, as I did, to my shame, neglect to read the magazine before I submitted, as I was trying to get it in by deadline.)

"Nomi's Wish" will have a life out there somewhere, don't worry!