A writing meme

I borrowed this from janni and have seen a couple of other ljers do it, so here goes:

The opening of the oldest story I still have a copy of:

I hadn't read this in awhile, and that rewrite I've been thinking about for ages... it looks a lot better now. :) (This dates back to eighth grade.)

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The opening of the first story I sold:

(From Into the Reach)

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The opening of my current work in progress:

Some of you saw this in a teaser not long ago. (There's a minor bit of swearing here, disguised by accent, just as a warning for those of you who prefer "network" safe writing.)

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