Forgive me for leaving a comment about your beautiful story here, at an entry you've written about your friend's death?
Though maybe it works out okay, given how death was woven into your story...
I was so, so impressed by how you wove together the different times and different scenes, adding in new strands of information and bringing us right to the end, when at last we could see how it all fit together. That was just genius. And Nomi's deep understanding of wishes, and her ability to send one into the future was marvelous, and really touching.
Also, you made me Google the Chasms. Scary-beautiful.
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Date: 2008-09-18 09:46 am (UTC)Though maybe it works out okay, given how death was woven into your story...
I was so, so impressed by how you wove together the different times and different scenes, adding in new strands of information and bringing us right to the end, when at last we could see how it all fit together. That was just genius. And Nomi's deep understanding of wishes, and her ability to send one into the future was marvelous, and really touching.
Also, you made me Google the Chasms. Scary-beautiful.