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Just a couple of links today.

First: Bitten by Books is having an awesome contest for the Linger release: a book club kit! The prize is ten copies of both Linger and Shiver, plus a $100 Visa card to host a party with. Definitely check it out!

Second: DriveThruRPG and DriveThruComics are having a huge Christmas in July sale, and the Flames Rising store is one of the participants. There's plenty of RPG material to look through (and, perhaps, add to your collection).
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For all of you readers who remember watching the Star Wars trilogy before you watched the prequels… do you remember what it felt like to watch the end of Empire Strikes Back? I was too young to see it (with any recollection) in the theater, but I remember very vividly getting to the heart-dropping, cliff-hanger ending of Empire Strikes Back and sitting in awe of the people who had to watch the trilogy in the theaters, knowing there was a conclusion coming, but being equally aware that they had to wait for it. The release date of Return of the Jedi probably hadn't even been announced, so they had no idea that it would be three long years before finding out if Han Solo would stay frozen in carbonite forever, if he and Leia would ever get their happy ending, if the Empire would win after all.

Getting to the end of Linger feels exactly what I imagine that must have felt like, with the exception that, thankfully, Forever has both a title and a release date. (July 2011. I may have to start a countdown clock.) My heart has dropped, and I'm hanging from that story cliff, waiting to know if that happy ending will come after all.

In Shiver (reviewed here), we reached that happy ending spot, and I was surprised to learn that more books were planned. Grace and Sam, the girl who had never shifted and the boy who was about to become a wolf forever, had found a way to bring their worlds together. Not all was right with the world: Grace's parents were still absentee and, presumably, uncaring; Sam's father-figure was likely to stay a wolf forever; new wolves, teens who decided willingly to become werewolves, are brought into the pack; and the boy who had started the public outcry against the wolves when he was bitten did not survive the cure. In Linger, those issues come to a head: Grace's parents start to care about their lack of control in Grace's life, but in all the wrong ways. Sam begins to realize what it will take to be the human responsible for a pack of wolves if Beck, his adopted father, doesn't shift back to human. Adding to the storytelling perspectives of Grace and Sam, we add Cole, one of those potentially dangerous new pack members, and Isabel, Jack's sister, who feels that Jack's death is her fault.

Where Grace and Sam are appealing narrators, easy to identify with and easy to root for, Isabel and Cole are both prickly. Grace and Sam both have issues, only some of which they're dealing with, but Isabel and Cole seem to have baggage that requires a bus boy to cart it around for them. But as the stakes get higher in Linger, when Grace gets sick in a way that mimics a sickness in wolves that haven't shifted back to human in years, it's those two prickly perspectives that keep things grounded. Sam and Grace, who edge into co-dependent territory (understandable given their bond, but possibly less healthy than we last saw their relationship), need outsiders to look at the situation and demand action. And Isabel and Cole, both broken, Cole struggling with the idea of living at all, find themselves in positions to be the people to force that action, to keep everything from falling apart. It's my hope that in Forever, the act of keeping everyone else together brings the two of them healing as well.

Linger is definitely a stepping-stone book, the story in the middle that takes what seemed like small conflicts, builds them into momentous obstacles, and sets the bar for what comes after, the goal our heroes have to reach to save the day: a cure, not just temporary, but lasting and survivable. It seems, at the moment, insurmountable, and it could come too late to save them. But Linger is also a book of moments that reveal what is admirable and worth loving about the characters: perfect birthday presents, rejections at just the right moment, resolutions of faith, and coffee shop confessions. The characters are so vulnerable – prickly or not – that you want them to win, and even though the victory doesn't have the scope of saving the galaxy from an evil Empire, its resonance may be even deeper.
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I don't know what week it is. I'm beginning to think that will be a condition for the rest of my life as a mom. I do think a lot about how last year at this time, I was falling asleep for hours unintentionally and feeling sick to my stomach, and that my act of creativity was biological. Bug's "story," thus far, has been a delightful one, and I'm looking forward to her becoming a progressively bigger collaborator.

But on to my goals. I said last week: when you leave a story alone that long, is it yours any more? Is it the story you're meant to tell if you can set it down and walk away from it for a full year?

A lot of people had great things to say in the comments on that entry. [livejournal.com profile] jeff_duntemann's struck me as particularly poignant:

It may be less fair to ask "Is the story still mine?" in these cases than to ask, "Have I changed too much to remain its author?" Stories are not the only things that may be considered "works in progress."

This is sort of where my thought process has gone. In my questions, which are related but not intimately, I was seeing those two changing factors in two ways:

1) If I've left a story alone for a year, am I still the person who should write it? Does that story, as I would have told it, belong to the writer I am now? To echo Jeff, "Have I changed too much to write this story?"

2) If I've walked away from a story for a year, and wasn't compelled to write any more of it, it may be that the story I was trying to write isn't the one that needed me to write it. I think about that in terms of the Blackstone Academy project a lot. There are elements in that story that came from an earlier story that was also not the story I needed to write. So I think what will be best is leaving that draft, those three chapters I've already written, as scaffolding. I think I should scrap them and start over. And based on where I am in my writing goals these days (inspired largely by [livejournal.com profile] slwhitman and her Tu Books project and the entries about the importance of multicultural F/SF over at Genreville), I think that some of those elements will stick around, and others will go by the wayside.

Now, the quantifiables:

Reasonable goal:
* With my cowriter, finish the draft of our serial novel. (We're at chapter 10 of 20 -- halfway there!)
I finally went over [livejournal.com profile] lyster's chapter 11, and in response, it's now been made into chapters 11 and 12. My goal is to write chapters 13 and 14 to be ready for his review after his upcoming life event. I've already written 800 words (of the 1500 to 3000 word limit per chapter) of chapter 13, but there's a lot to accomplish in those two chapters, so I'm not sure what percentage I've actually finished. Still, progress is progress, and I revised the outline for the rest of the story, getting some good feedback from Max, so we're solidifying the awesome of here to the end.

* Write one short story.
This one is sneaking up on me fast. I want to have a solid short story ready for a submission deadline on August 1st; my short story writing tends to work in spurts, so there's still hope. I've settled on the idea that I'm going to work on, and if I can get a few hours with no other priorities, I should be able to slam something out in time to actually do revisions before the submission.

* Write multiple book reviews.
Since last week, I've written a PW review, two reviews for Mythprint, and one that will appear here at MtU&E in honor of [livejournal.com profile] m_stiefvater's awesome recent release, Linger. I still have more reviews on deck, but I'm actually making progress here.

* Additional contracted work that's come up has been going reasonably well, also. Lots of copyediting, but also some writing -- I finished a short essay on the Harry Potter books and will be writing four more essays this summer about various notable novels.

Extended goal:

* Write three chapters of the YA novel I'm working on.
Well, you already heard about this one above. Scrapping and starting over.

* Write three short stories (including the one above).
When I was looking at my percolating ideas, I came up with a couple that might be worth following up on, besides the one for the deadline. At least one involves giants.

* Restart the adult novel I haltingly began last year now that it's percolated and I have an idea of where it's going.
I think I'm going to reprioritize this -- meaning that I'm unprioritizing it. I'd rather see what the restart on the YA novel becomes.

* Blog at least three times a week
Ha! Well, that may actually happen this week, but I've not established any sort of pattern, have I? :)
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In one of the comments from yesterday's post, [livejournal.com profile] lyster (good friend of the blog and fellow Substrater Max Gladstone) noted things that have been distracting him from writing and included this sentence:

This wasn't a problem until recently, when I got a day job, because I could get all my Work done during the day and only rarely had small-w work (the paying, non-writing kind) to compete with it for time.

There are definitely days when I forget to think of the Work -- the writing that's actually telling stories, that reflects passions and suffering and (dare I say?) art and the mythic impulse (to use a coined phrase) -- with its capital letter. And by all rights, the Work needs its capital!

It is so easy to get bogged down in small-w work. It pays the bills. It's easily justifiable as a way to spend time. It has real actual deadlines. There's someone on the other end holding you accountable. And that makes it so, so easy to give small-w work the priority.

[livejournal.com profile] m_stiefvater just posted recently about how to write a novel. (Go read that post and come back. I'll wait.) She says:

This is what you say: “‘I’m writing the novel. Starting now. Not only that, but I’m finishing it.”

Focusing on the Work is the only way for that novel to ever become more than a dream.

I was chatting with a fellow freelancer about the balance of work vs. Work (in slightly different words) in an e-mail earlier today, and I offered advice, despite my not having mastered the balance. I almost always err on the side of work. And that means the Work often suffers or gets left behind. I need to follow [livejournal.com profile] m_stiefvater's advice: I'm writing the novel. Starting now.

Well... maybe starting after this deadline. :)
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It's easy to get a feel for how incredibly talented Maggie Steifvater is by watching the book trailer she made for Shiver. Step one, write an amazing book. Step two, create cut-paper pieces. Step three, create stop motion art with the cut-paper. Step four, oh, and write the musical score while you're at it.

I've asked Maggie on facebook if there's anything she can't do, and while she says she's no good at baking shaped cakes, I'm still sort of convinced that she actually has superpowers.

I am delighted to welcome Maggie here today as a guest of the blog, discussing the story behind Shiver. Thanks, Maggie! (Don't forget to check out Maggie's blog here on livejournal--she's [livejournal.com profile] m_stiefvater--and keep an eye out for her other books, Lament and Ballad, due out in October.)

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There’s this common writing wisdom that says that there are only a handful of plots in the world and a million ways to tell each of them. I always agreed with that concept in a dry academic way, but it wasn’t until I wrote Shiver that I realized how true it was.

Because Sam’s story in Shiver is this: wolf bites boy, boy becomes wolf. And Grace’s story is: girl falls in love with werewolf.

I didn’t really think about the idea that there were a million ways that this could go until well after I wrote the novel. Interview questions started coming in and a lot of them were variations of “do you think that readers will be upset to find out this isn’t a traditional werewolf story?” and “this isn’t a traditional romance, do you think readers will be surprised?”

Because although I started Shiver with a definite plan in my head for the mood and character of the story, just looking at the plot, that was not the only way it could go. It’s odd to think about how, in the hands of another writer, Sam and Grace’s story could’ve been a horror. Had I tweaked the plot differently, it could’ve been a thriller. Or a straight romance. Heck, a comedy.

It reminds me of my other life as an artist. There are a lot of parallels between art-making and writing, but artistic style and genre is the one I’m thinking of now. One of the last things an artist acquires as they get better is a style: that distinct way of marking the canvas or paper, that unique way of seeing the world that makes a Van Gogh a Van Gogh or a Rembrandt a Rembrandt.

As an artist, first you learn how to replicate the image of a scene realistically, then you figure out how to replicate the mood of the scene instead. It’s about seeing all the details in the scene and then choosing which you keep and which you omit. Seeing all the colors but picking only the ones that further your moody agenda. Choosing which lines to reproduce faithfully and which ones to distort and exaggerate.

So five artists can paint the same scene five wildly different ways, depending on what they choose to focus on. A painting of a couple in front of the Eiffel Tower, for instance. Do you paint all of it? Focus in close on the couple? Paint it in black and white? Emphasize the scar on the man’s face? Day? Night? Blues? Golds?

It’s the same way with writing. That same image -- that same plot of wolf bites boy, boy becomes wolf -- can be done five million different ways. And has been. It all depends on which details you focus on, what you exaggerate, what you choose to leave out. When I wrote Shiver, I wanted a bittersweet love story, something poignant and deliberate and lovely. So instead of focusing on the horror, I chose only the details that supported my version of events.

It’s strange to think of my characters being written down a different road, because though there might be a handful of plots being written millions of different ways, there was only one way I could write this one.
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As I mentioned earlier, the lovely Maggie Stiefvater ([livejournal.com profile] m_steifvater) will be joining the blog on Friday as part of her tour promoting Shiver, which comes out September 1st. To prep me for her guest blog, Maggie very, very kindly had her publicist send me an advance copy of Shiver, which I devoured today. I started it this afternoon, taking a break from some copyediting work, and the book did not want to be put down. So, this is my very brief, non-spoilery review of Shiver to prep y'all for Maggie's visit on Friday.

Grace was attacked by werewolves as a child, and was saved by Sam, a young wolf destined to one day become the pack leader. Over the years, they watch each other, girl and wolf, with Sam never revealing his identity. (This is in the first ten pages, so I promise, not spoilery.) When events bring them together, finally, their romance takes on the star-crossed lover archetype to the nth degree. This is a Romeo and Juliet where Romeo isn't a fickle teen, devoted to one girl at the beginning of the play but willing to kill himself for another by the end; where Juliet isn't a teen in the throes of her first love with no sense of practicality and meaning. Sam and Grace are real people in an extraordinary situation, given a limited shot at true love.

I don't normally recommend books on the basis that they make me cry (I cry at a lot of books, and don't usually pick up books based on the "made me cry" recommendation from others), but Shiver is heartwrenching and beautiful and worthy of all the tears I spent on it. Not only is the relationship between Grace and Sam potent, but the relationships of each of them to their friends and family/pack are so amazingly well drawn that many of the touching moments came out of those, rather than the romance.

I'm having trouble finishing the review without just devolving into gushing, so I think I'll leave it here, with the highest recommendation. Don't forget to come back and hear about the novel in Maggie's own words on Friday!
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It's been awhile.

I've been involved in sort of a big new project that's been taking up a lot of my time. It's called: being pregnant. It's very exciting for both me and my husband! That said, it's amazing how much your time management skills change when you have to sleep a much larger portion of the day. I should be back to normal in a few weeks, assuming I'm a text book example of how these things are supposed to go. (I suppose this is also practice for learning new time management skills when I have to balance being a writer and being a mother!)

Now that I've finished up a few deadlines that I was trying to balance with my new schedule over the last few weeks, I'm hoping to be back on track to blog here at MtU&E. There's a lot to talk about! We had Substrate today, which always gives me fodder for thought, I got my Callie award in the mail and will post a picture of that soon (along with the first of my weekly contests, until I run out of prizes!), and Maggie Stiefvater ([livejournal.com profile] m_stiefvater) has done a brilliant guest entry for this Friday. I'll get to talk about Maggie's new book, Shiver, and I've read a couple of really interesting blog posts from other folks that deserve conversation here. I've also submitted my first blog post to Flames Rising ([livejournal.com profile] flamesrising_lj), so I'll make a note when that goes up.

Yes, lots happening in this part of the universe, and there will be much activity here next week. It'll be good to be back.
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We're a week into the New Year, and I haven't really put together a list of resolutions. I'm not sure that I will. I do have a goal of forming an actual spiritual practice (rather than a haphazard spiritual observance). The same is true of my writing. I think I lost track of my apprenticeship somewhere along the way and need to get back on the right path.

But 2009 is looking pretty exciting for a number of reasons. Here's some of what's coming up:

1) Substrate. This is my new, semi-local writing group! Since we're based out of New Haven, it's very local to me, but some of the writers will be coming from Boston and D.C., so it'll be a trek. Luckily, New Haven is an old stomping ground for everyone but me (as the person who has spent the least amount of time living here on Connecticut's shoreline, or so I believe), so the writing group meetings can be combined with other events as well. Like, say, D&D games.

2) Baeg Tobar. I've gotten involved with BT again, and am very excited to be working with Scott and Jeremy and Daniel and the BT crew. There are some amazing things in store for the site this year, including serial fiction, short stories, and a regularly updating web comic.

3) England. I've been invited to be the TA/driver/chaperon for the Simon's Rock England Trip in May of this year. The last time I was in England was 2003, when my sister and I went on our (now infamous, I'm sure) Isle of Man trip, where we were attacked by gulls and almost fell into the Chasms. (I exaggerate only slightly.) We'd begun the trip in England, and we stayed in Glastonbury for a good chunk of it. I am very excited to return, and hope to become reacquainted with Geoffrey and Pat Ashe. I've fallen out of touch with the Arthurian scholar and his wife in recent years, and am looking forward to seeing them again.

4) Getting past 1st level. My Mythic Greece players, with the exception of the one who is currently nannying in England (and so hasn't made the past few sessions) are all second level. Also, I got a GM medal at Worlds Apart for running sessions there. (They were shocked with how excited I was with a little virtual medal, but I am constantly in awe of how well we're treated there. They are good people, and if you're near Pioneer Valley and in need of a game store, they should be your go-to point.)

5) Since it's up on the site, I think it's fair to announce that my LFR module, "Head above Water," is premiering at DDXP this year. I won't be going to Fort Wayne to usher it into the world, but I'm really excited to have it given such an excellent spot to begin play!

6) Dogs in the Vineyard. The old Dogs game is coming to a close, and the new Dogs game is ramping up. There are fun times waiting to happen.

7) Another Shoreline summer. There will be sailing, there will be beach cook outs, there will probably be grill outs in our new back yard. (We moved in December.) I may be dreaming in advance about sunshine, but man am I looking forward to beach weather!

8) A million things to read. Moving made me consolidate my TBR pile--the ones I've actually *purchased* and not just added to the list in my head. I'd take a picture, but it's a bit embarrassing. Add to that the number of awesome authors with books coming out this year (or just released): [livejournal.com profile] frost_light, [livejournal.com profile] melissa_writing, [livejournal.com profile] ilona_andrews, [livejournal.com profile] sartorias, [livejournal.com profile] jimhines, Carrie Vaughn, [livejournal.com profile] rkvincent, [livejournal.com profile] blue_succubus, [livejournal.com profile] antonstrout, [livejournal.com profile] amanda_marrone, [livejournal.com profile] jenlyn_b, [livejournal.com profile] m_stiefvater, [livejournal.com profile] mdhenry, [livejournal.com profile] nalini_singh... all of them on my Must Be Read list. (And that's just with what I know from livejournals or can back up with Amazon research. Heck, that's mostly for the first six months of this year.)

So, yes, 2009 is looking up. I know, I'm probably one of the few people in the world who is sad to see 2008 go, but it was a good year for me, as far as my short stories getting published, and I'm pretty pleased with it on retrospect. But, as they say, onward and upward!

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